20 February 2007
GOING TRADITIONAL: Status Report
Rejection #6 from the Liza Dawson Associates:Celise,
Thanks for sending me DRAVEN ATREIDES. There's so much that works well here, including a strong voice, lively dynamic among the characters (Draven, Poe, and Ricky), and lots of punchy dialogue. Unfortunately, the plot develops a bit slowly for my tastes and as a result, I might not be the ideal champion of this manuscript. I am sure other agents will feel differently and I thank you again for thinking of me. Good luck and feel free to send along any future projects.
Best,
David
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