15 February 2007
GOING TRADITIONAL, Status Report
My fourth rejection from the Donald Maas Literary Agency:Dear Celise:
Many thanks for sending along the partial of DAVEN ATREIDES.
I’ve now had a chance to review, and unfortunately have decided to pass, in the end. While I found this material nicely written, with an interesting concept and fresh voice, I felt these opening pages didn’t quite establish the hook and conflict quickly enough.
Thanks, again, for thinking of me, and very best wishes on your agent search. Please keep me in mind for future submissions.
- Stephen Barbara
Donald Maass Literary Agency
Labels: Going Traditional